Not all She seemed
Upon the balcony in midsummer
The girl with soft caring eyes
Smiled and leaned to kiss me
In the moonlight above the swimming pool
But she smoked a cigarette
And was no Capulet
Comments
Oh, now THAT ending I LOVE. Nice. Great transition.
(and made me laugh)
Thanks for submitting this to our poetry group, Brandon.
Who is Brandon?
Lol...well, I actually MEANT Michael, but I believe I had just been looking at Brandon's poem so swapped your names in my head! Brandon is also part of this group - you should go have a look at the poem he submitted.
Nice. I like the wall at the end.
by 00A5 over 2 years ago